Ami Je Tomar.. chin chin chin!
Long back in 2022, after the success of Bhool Bhulaiyaa 2, we had come up with an idea for the plot of Bhool Bhulaiyaa 3, which was to be a an actual sequel connecting the first two films, and not a spiritual sequel like Baaghi and Murder series, where nothing is connected, just a few names are same.
Bhool Bhulaiyaa 3 was not even announced and we had no idea if there would be a continued story, a different cast or anything. Only that Rajpal Yadav had mentioned somewhere that he may be of a different color if it comes to making Bhool Bhulaiyaa 3. So let’s go back to 2022, forget the actual Bhool Bhulaiyaa 3 for a while and enjoy the Bhool Bhulaiyaa of Kartik Aaryan and Akshay Kumar together, as a continued storyline from the previous two films.
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Reet And Ruhan Are Married
The film opens with a song of Reet and Ruhan while they are going on their honeymoon. It’s a travel song with beautiful locations in India, with some romance and some interactions with the public. Similar to Hum Jo Chalne Lage from Jab We Met. [Credits are shown on the bottom left and right.]
Instead of getting a hotel, they get a room in a Haveli for cheap. The only catch is, this Haveli too has a legend of a ghost and that a room should not be opened. The reason why very few guests choose to stay at this place. The caretaker, a very quirky and funny character, tells them the legend in very few lines.
But Ruhan and Reet are not scared anymore. They have had their own share of Atma and Darwaza. They have the jo hoga dekh lenge attitude. Plus nothing will happen if they don’t open the door, right?
The Second Couple
Enter, Dr Aditya Srivastav and Adha Radha. It is their 10th marriage anniversary and they also chose to stay at the same Haveli. At night, the lights of the Haveli kept flickering. All 4 felt that the caretaker was doing it on purpose, so the girls sent the guys down to check with the caretaker. While walking down the lobby, Ruhan and Aditya cross each other for the first time.
[imagine both of them crossing each other in slow motion, maintaining eye contact, while the Bhool Bhulaiyaa theme plays in the background. Ruhan takes the elevator while Aditya takes the stairs. A subtle nod to the difference of approach of the two characters].
While talking to the caretaker, they both have a slight argument with each other and hence a journey of a friendly rivalry starts between them.
The Bonding
The next day the four meet each other at the breakfast buffet. While the women had a friendly acquaintance while putting food on their plates, Ruhan and Aditya again got into a fight. Maybe on the last piece of idli or croissant. Wahi baccho wali fights, but full fun for the audience. As there was not much space, they had to share the same table. Reet and Radha got talking while the men ate in silence giving each other weird looks.
Later they got to know that there was a taxi strike in the city and no driver was available, even the hotel drivers had joined the strike that day. Hence the guests could not go out to explore the city. So the caretaker asks them to enjoy the staycation at the Haveli. Now the four meet again and this time they actually have a proper conversation.
Radha tells them about Monjulika and Avni, while Reet tells them about Monjulika and Anjulika. Radha believes their story of the real ghosts while Aditya has a hard time believing it. Ruhan and Aditya again start a verbal argument of sorts, which Reet interrupts and explains very politely, how they also did not believe initially but it all happened in front of their eyes. Radha too asks Aditya to be polite and understanding. Aditya respects that, but he is a man of science so he is not able to fully accept it.
When they were leaving, both Ruhan and Aditya gave each other a stare while wearing their respective goggles. Aditya calls him Farzi Baba while Ruhan calls him Pagal Doctor.
Chote Pandit
Chote Pandit is yellow this time. When Aditya sees him, he tries to talk to him but Chote Pandit says something gibberish and acts as if he does not know Aditya. Same happens with Ruhan, he thinks of the white Chote Pandit and talks to him but again gets no logical reply from him. Both think he has totally gone mad. Chote Pandit talks in jumbled up sentences like Yoda from Star Wars. He also throws in some random words and phrases every now and then which makes no sense at all.
It is only towards the interval when both Aditya and Ruhan encounter Chote Pandit together outside the Haveli. Chote Pandit as usual does not make any sense so Aditya and Ruhan ask each other and find out that they both had met a Chote Pandit, but red and white, and in different cities.
Seeing them talk Chote Pandit says,
“Problem ye hai ki wo ladki hai, Tichkule ke pass paisa double karne ki scheme hai,” and starts to leave.
Ruhan grabs him and threatens him ki uspe chudail chhod dega, but Aditya gestures him to calm down, removes his specs, kneels down and looks in Chote Pandit’s eyes. He hypnotises him and asks him what’s going on.
For the first time Chote Pandit speaks normally and tells them that they were triplets who had a traumatic incident when they were ten years old and then split up. They have not met each other again, only have a faded memory.
The Forbidden Door
The first night of the staycation, the light flickered again. Again all 4 felt that the caretaker was doing it on purpose. So they decided to hang out with the caretaker and ask him about the Legend of the Haveli. After all, they had nothing else to do.
They lit a small fire in the courtyard and sat down with drinks and snacks. The caretaker, in his weirdly funny style, was drinking his desi daru and started the story:
Before the Britishers came, the last King of this palace attacked his neighboring kingdom for land and loot. After killing the King and Queen, he found their daughter hiding in a room. His heart melted and he took the young princess to his Kingdom. He brought her up as her own along with his son, the prince. But little did he know, that the girl remembered everything and was waiting for her turn to take revenge.
A few years later, the Queen passed away. It looked like she died of Tuberculosis (TB), but it was the princess who was giving her slow poison. She was an expert of herbs and nobody knew what kind of plants she was growing in the royal garden along with the flowers and other important herbs.
There was a Daima (Nanny) who took care of the prince and princess and both of them also loved her a lot. On the day of the coronation (Raj Tilak) of the prince, when everyone was drinking and celebrating the new King, she slipped something in the old King’s drink and he started coughing. He felt he should rest so he went to his room. She then brought him a remedy (kaadha) to ease his throat. To the King’s surprise, his voice was completely gone. Now he couldn’t scream for help.
The princess slit the king in multiple places. Blood spattered everywhere. The bleeding King reached for the door but she pulled the rug from under his feet. He fell. She dragged him and stabbed him multiple times on his back. He somehow tried getting up but could not. He was on his knees, breathing heavily and bleeding profusely. The room was full of blood everywhere. She then grabbed the King by his hair, and slit his throat.
She then went to kill the Prince. There were less guards on duty inside the palace and most of them were drunk, so it was easy for the princess to dodge them. But along the way, Daima pulled her into a room. It was the princess’ room itself. Daima cried and pleaded not to kill the prince. She told her she loved both of them dearly. She could not let the prince die. She also had a duty towards the crown, so she couldn’t even hand her to the guards. She tried explaining that she had took her revenge with the old King, the prince had nothing to do with. Spare him and run away. So that she can both fulfil her duty towards the crown and save both the children.
The princess was emotional, tears rolled down her cheek, but she told Daima that it was her duty as well, towards her fallen kingdom, and stabbed her. She was angry she had to do this to her. She blamed the old King for her death as well. She was angry at Daima too because she was loyal to the cruel King. In a fit of rage, she not only killed her, but hung her body from the ceiling. She was mad with rage and revenge, she went on to kill the prince.
A guard spotted her in blood soaked clothes and sounded the alarm. He thought the princess was hurt but she slit his throat and jumped on his body. She stabbed him multiple times. She hated every soul in this kingdom and wanted to kill each one of them.
More guards arrived. She took the dead guard’s sword and started fighting. The prince also came out. The princess was pushed back into her room now, but she killed several guards along the way. The prince entered the room and saw Daima hanging, blood dripping from her body. The army general arrived and told the prince that the King was dead. He then advised to kill the princess as there was no choice left. He reminded that it was his duty as well and she was not family, not really.
The prince was baffled, he could not comprehend what all had just happened. The princess was his sister, his family, at least he believed that in his heart. He could not kill her. He asked the guards to lock her in her own room until he could process all this.
The princess shouted that she had sworn to kill everyone in the royal family and everyone loyal to the crown. The prince left with numb eyes and the door closed.
2 days later when the guards opened the door, the princess was found hanging from the ceiling. She had cut herself and painted the walls with blood and a message in Hindi,
“Sab Marenge.”
A week later, a guard was found dead in the princess’ room. His throat was slit and the dagger was in his own hand. 2 more guards were killed in the next two days in the palace. The Raj Purohit was called and he decided to cleanse the palace by doing a Maha Yagya. After that, there were no deaths in the palace for a few days.
On the thirteenth day from the King’s death, the prince was found hanging in his room. No blood this time. The Raj Purohit felt that there was no option but to seal the princesses’ room and trap her alma inside. And that is how the legend of the Haveli, the forbidden door and Monjulika was born.
Few decades later when the Britishers took over the palace, one of them opened the door in a hope to find treasures inside. He was found hanging in the room the next day. Again the door was sealed by a renowned Pandit and it has not been opened since a century.
Everyone was listening with intensity. Aditya noticed the expression on the other three and started laughing. Said it was just a hoax to attract tourists. Ruhan was serious till now but how could he look scared in front of Aditya, so he also laughed and said it was nothing.
That night, Reet woke up due to a nightmare but did not tell anyone. Radha on the other hand, woke up due to a weird sound coming from outside the window. Aditya was fast asleep. She thought it might be some nocturnal animal and went back to sleep. The rest of the night was calm and quiet.
Darwaza Khul Gaya
The next day the strike continued and they had to stay in again. After lunch Aditya proposed them to check out the third floor. Everyone agreed and they cautiously sneaked out to the third floor. It was not like the rest of the palace. It was not maintained, the walls needed repair, the floors were full of dirt, dried leaves and dead insects. The four of them reached the forbidden door. It had a big lock wrapped in sacred thread and red cloth that is used in Pujas and havans.
Aditya proposes opening the door. Reet and Radha are reluctant. Ruhan is also a bit skeptical but can’t let Aditya be the bravest one. He agrees and says if they find treasure, they will divide it equally. Aditya agrees and they open the door.
The room is quite smelly and full of dirt. The walls have some markings. Reet asks if it can be the blood of Monjukila on the walls. Ruhan says, maybe. Aditya adds that its difficult to tell if its actually blood or just some kind of paint, it has been over a hundred years. They look all around but don’t find anything valuable. It was getting dark and there was no electricity in that room. So they leave. They felt nothing paranormal. But while walking back, Ruhan feels a gust of wind on the back of his neck. He turns but there is nothing there. He gives a last look on the door, and heads back with others.
[The camera pans down. On the dirt filled pathway, along with the prints of the men’s shoes and the women’s stilettos, there is another print. A proper bare footprint.]
The Trouble Begins
That night at dinner, one hotel staff came running in the dining hall. His skin had turned pale and he was sweating all over. The caretaker, who was talking to one of the guests, rushed to him as he did not want the guests to worry and took him out of the hall. Aditya followed him in curiosity, Radha after him, and eventually Reet and Ruhan as well. The staff was not able to speak so he just took them to a room on the first floor.
A female staff was found hanging from the ceiling. Blood dripping from her body. There were blood spatters all over the room. And there was the text in Hindi, “Sab Marenge.”
The caretaker rushes to the reception. He calls a pandit and police both. The police takes away the body and instructs everyone to stay away from the crime scene. Its a small city and the police are also local people, who believe in the legend. The other guests are all scared and want to leave. The police informs them that the strike is over but they’ll have to wait till the morning for the taxis.
The four of them are standing in the big balcony along the lobby on the second floor. Pandit and Caretaker are walking by when the Pandit stops to look at the four of them. The Pandit leaves without saying a word. Aditya tries to go after him when the caretaker stops him and accuses the four of them on opening the door. Ruhan tries to explain but the caretaker lashes out on them. His face is full of anger, fear and betrayal.
The four of them just stand there. There has been a death. Ghost or not, this is not a joke.
The Possession
They are still in the balcony, silently contemplating what has happened, until Radha breaks the silence.
Radha: Humein wo darwaza nahi kholna chahiye tha. [in a low voice]
Aditya: Tumhe seriously lagta hai ye kisi atma ka kaam hai?
Reet : Insaan ka bhi toh nahi lagta?
Aditya: Oh come-on, bhayank hai lekin kisi insaan ka hi kaam hai.
Ruhan: Koi bhare hotel mein itna sab karke chala gaya aur kisi ko pata phi nahi chala?
Aditya: Hotel nahi, purani haveli hai aur adhi khali padi hai.
Radha: Lekin jis tarah se use mara tha..
Aditya: Radha, pehle bhi toh hume Monjulika hi lagi thi, par nahi thi na
Ruhan: Lekin humari wali thi.
Aditya: Ohh main toh bhul hi gaya, ki apne toh asli Monjulika dekhi hai. [sarcastically]
Ruhan: Haan dekhi bhi hai, lade bhi hai aur jeete bhi hain [looks from Aditya to Radha]
Aditya: Kaha tum is dhongi baba ki baat sunn rahi ho.
Reet : Aditya, bas! [Reet reacts in anger] Aap Ruhan ki aisi bezziti nahi kar sakte.
Apko humari baat pe yakeen nahi, na sahi. Usse humara sach nahi badal jayega.
[The argument continues but nobody notices that Ruhan has taken a few steps back. He felt a gust of wind on his neck again and is now silent. The argument is now between the three of them. Radha is trying to calm Aditya down. Reet decides to leave when suddenly somebody falls from above the balcony to the ground. The three of them rush to the railing and see that a staff has fallen down. He is dead.]
Radha: Hum second floor pe hain, matlab upar se..
[The caretaker and other staff have rushed to see the body on the ground floor. He tells them that he has sealed off the third floor, so how come.. ]
Reet : Ruhan, chalo hum..
[Ruhan is standing still facing a wall. He speaks in a strange voice. A non-human voice.]
He started speaking in poetry. Nobody understood what exactly he said. It seemed like a riddle, a message. After speaking Ruhan fell to his knees. The three of them rushed to him. To see if he is alright, still confused what happened. When they hear a voice from behind a pillar.
“Daima.” Chote Pandit speaks. “Daimaaaa,” he says again coming forward.
He explains that Monjulika was not the only one who made a promise that night, to take revenge. Daima too had sworn to the crown, and promised the Queen that she will protect both her children. She failed in her life. Her spirit was also trapped in the room with Monjulika’s. She is trying to free her soul till this day. She was the one who possessed Ruhan and passed the message. She told the procedure of Monjulika’s mukti.
The problem was, nobody understood what she (through Ruhan) meant.
Ruhan: Nahi chhodegi, wo kisi ko nahi chhodegi.
Reet : Ruhan.. [shakily]
Ruhan: [turns and speaks]
“Atyachari Raja, Lobh tumhara.
Gharon ko ronda, masoomo ko mara.
Legi badla, karegi vinash,
Bharega Rajya, jo bhi karega niwas.”
Radha: Ruhan, kya bol rahe ho?
“Cheen liya jo lautana padega,
Kiya jo vaada nibhana padega,
Maa ka aanchal pass pakare,
Raj-rakt se hi mukti paave.”
All four could not go to their rooms that night. They were all in the lobby along balcony. They barely slept. In the morning, when other guests were leaving, Aditya was standing at the entrance, just gazing and thinking about last night.
The caretaker came and said that he could not stop them from going, but this Haveli is not habitable anymore. The business will be shut and many more killings will follow. Aditya asks him if the CCTV cameras were active.
They go into the surveillance room. The cameras went offline when the first killing happened. Then came back again. In the second killing, the victim was last seen climbing up the third floor. It looked like he was hypnotised or possessed.
Aditya asked to show him the second floor balcony footage. While the four were arguing, there appeared to be a mist entering Ruhan. After he spoke in poetry, the mist left his body. It was quite clear from the footage that it was indeed a spirit that entered Ruhan. But Aditya was a man of science, it was very difficult to wrap his head around it.
Meeting the OG Monjulika
Aditya met the others and asked them to stay back, while he is going to Delhi to seek some answers.
Radha: Par tum ja haha rate ho?
Aditya: Dilli
Ruhan: Kyu?
Aditya: Ek purane dost se milne.
Aditya asked Ruhan to take care of everyone till he is back. He spoke in the most respectable and trusting voice for the first time to Ruhan, and left.
It was dangerous to stay back, it was only the caretaker and these three now.
The pandit had called Swamiji, the chief pandit. He directed that they can setup tents in the courtyard if they want, though he would not advise it. He gave a taveez to each of them. Asked them that they could only access a few selected areas, that too from sunrise to sunset. After that they should be in the courtyard only, which was also surrounded by enchanted threads like an arena. It was weird, but they chose to do this.
Aditya was away for two nights and both nights they heard the singing and dancing sounds of Ami Je Tomar from the Haveli.
Aditya reached Delhi and went straight to meet his friend and now relative, Siddharth. A maid opened the door and told him that Siddharth was out of town, but then he was greeted by Avni. She hugged Aditya and invited him in. They chatted for a while then Avni made Aditya meet their son, Aryan.
Aditya told her the entire situation. Avni, who had more experience in legends and fantasy stories, tried to help Aditya solve the mystery of the poem. On the other side, Reet, Ruhan and Radha were trying to solve it along with Swamiji.
After hours of brainstorming, both the parties were able to partially solve the poem, they spoke on phone and shared information. It was then decided that while Aditya returns, Reet and Ruhan will go to the neighbouring town from where the princess originally was. They needed a some soil of her motherland (ruins of the palace now) for exorcism. Radha and the caretaker would help Swamiji prepare for the exorcism. There was only one problem, they needed Royal Blood.
There was only one possibility, Siddharth. He was of Royal lineage. But Siddharth was not in the city, and they did not have much time. Avni smiled and reminded Aditya that Aryan too is Royal Blood. Aditya said how could he ask for blood of a ten year old. Avni asked him not to be dramatic. He is not getting sacrificed. The doctor would have taken his blood sample if he was seriously ill, right? Aditya hesitated but had to agree due to the situation.
A trusted compounder from a path lab was called, which took some blood from Aryan and gave it to Aditya. He thanked Avni and Aryan, and left. Meanwhile the others were ready with the other ingredients for the exorcism.
Ami Je Tomar
It was time. Swamiji had called 7 pandits to assist him. Apart from the four guests, there was only the caretaker and chote pandit. Swamiji started chanting the mantras.
Monjulika came singing and dancing, in her human and beautiful form. Swamiji and the pandits continued chanting. After a few minutes, Swamiji stopped. Monjulika stopped too. She did not realise but she was inside a circle swamiji had carved on the ground. It was like a forcefield, a Laxman rekha. She could not go out but she was not powerless. Swamiji restarted the mantras, and slowly Monjulika changed form. From a beautiful princess, she became a terrifying witch. She rose up in the air and the seven pandits rose along with her.
It seemed like the pandits were held by a visible hand on their throat. They were struggling for life. Aditya, Ruhan and other could not do anything. Swamiji chanted louder but Monjulika didn’t budge. She was laughing. They had very less time. The pandits could die any second now.
Suddenly Monjulika stops laughing. A rope is choking her heck. It takes a moment for everyone to realise that on the other end of the courtyard, Daima has appeared. The other end of the rope is tied to her neck. It seems like it is the same rope with which Monjulika hung Daima. Ruhan runs his hand at the back of his neck, realising why he was feeling the chills on his neck all this time.
Monjulika’s control over the 7 pandits break, and they fall to the ground, gasping for air. Monjulika turns around and pulls Daima into the circle. They both rise further up into the air and start to fight. Seeing this, Swamiji puts all the final ingredients into the havan kund.
As he drops the final element, the Royal blood into the havan kund, it weakens Monjulika for a brief moment. Daima puts her hand on her forehead, and throws her down into the havan kund. She starts to burn in the fire. She screams in pain and slowly her soul burns and turns into ashes.
Daima comes down. She starts turning a pale translucent colour, like how everyone imagines spirits look like. Everyone is silently looking at her. A tear rolls down her cheeks. She is smiling. She has finally fulfilled her last promise to the Queen, however she could. Monjulika ko mukti mil gayi. Now she can rest. She turns into glitter and vanishes in the sky.
The Beginning
Its dawn. The pandits have left and the caretaker has called the staff to clean up. The four of them are ready to leave, when Swamiji walks up to them.
Swamiji: Aisa lagta hai Monjulika ki mukti aap charo ke hath hi likhi thi.
Reet : Lekin Swamiji, hum toh bas by chance yaha the.
Swamiji: Bacche by chance hota toh main tumhe ye nahi kehra. Soch ke dekho, tum nahi kehti toh Ruhan iss haveli mein kamra book nahi karta. Agar Radha tumse dosti nahi karti toh tum choro sath milke wo darwaza nahi kholte. Agar Aditya nahi hota toh wo Avni se milke paheli nahi suljha pata, rajsi khoon nahi la pata, Ruhan yaha nahi hota toh Daima uske andar ake paheli nahi bata pati. Ye hona likha hua tha.
All of of them were shocked confused and were trying to process this. Aditya smiled, which then turned into a big grin.
Radha: Kya hua?
Aditya: Well, I’m a man of science. Kabhi socha nahi the ki ye sab apni aaknon se dekhunga aur yakeen karne lagunga.
Ruhan splits up and takes Swamiji a little further to talk to him alone.
Ruhan : Swamiji, par Daima mere hi andar kyu ayi?
Swamiji: Arre tum toh Rooh Baba ho, tumhare andar nahi toh kiske andar ati.
Ruhan : Par Swamiji, main nakli Baba hu, bas acting karta hu.
Swamiji: (his expression changes) Matlab isse pehle kabhi koi atma tumhare andar pravesh nahi ki?
[Ruhan shakes his head. Swamiji smiles.]
Ruhan : Kya hua?
Swamji: Iska matlab tumahri kahani abhi shuru hui hai Rooh Baba. Abhi bahut kuch likha hua hai tumhare liye.
Swamiji turns and walks away, leaving Ruhan confused. He turns in slow motion to join the others. Bhool Bhulaiyaa theme music plays, followed by slow motion montage of them hugging and saying goodbyes. They get into there taxis and exit the main haveli gate.
[Music stops and Chote Pandit enters the gate]
“Shehzade ne Dhamaka kar diya,
Sarfire ne Mission ko Mangal kar diya,
Gadar ki krem Katha samapt hui
Good Newwz se Indoo Jawan hui!”
[fade to black | theme music restarts | credits roll]
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The initial idea was presented by Suryakant Dholakhandi, who runs a fantastic movie related account by the name maadalaadlaishere on Instagran and X. He wanted to bring the OG cast back with the return of Tabu’s Monjulika and Anjulika both. My mind went to a different direction, but it would not have been possible if he had not presented his original idea to me. So thank you Surya! Teri zabaan bahaut chalti hai, aur acchi chalti hai.
Author: Ishan Jain
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